literature

I CRY... I TRY..

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As the skies
filled with dark clouds
& the angry voices so loud
My mind feels so empty
im a bit misunderstood
Will i be this way for good..
Now i can feel my heartbeats faster as another thunder
Growls with anger

I cry...
for you i cry, i cry, i cry..
I try...
my best for you i try, i try, i try


Im like an angel with a broken wings
Your like a vicious viper deadly when it stings
My heart is broken
You left it all unspoken
I can feel my heartbeats faster
As reality hits me its now or never
hmmm..just a piece of something not special...
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subearanhuman's avatar
i'm not a writer. so it's difficult for me to critique, let alone compliment. but you are very good at writing and putting down just what you are thinking. i can totally relate to this.